Peer Reviews of Initial Draft

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 Hello Welcome back to another blog! Today we were asked to review our peers movie openers. Here is our thoughts on our peers openers so far. 

The group one said that our shots are shaky. We tried our best to hold it straight, but next time maybe we should use a tripod. They also said our editing transitions were a little choppy. This is somthing we can and will fix when we finalize our movie and perfect the editing. Another thing they said was our focus was in and out. This is something we need to make sure to look at for the future and any shots that we can retake. Overall they complemented our opener so far except for some other aspects regarding our storyline. These will be fixed when the rest of our movie is finished.

Group Two said similar things about our opener. Especially about the focus. That is osmthing we will definily fix in our future filming and do the best to fix it in what we have already filmed. 

Thankyou for reading. Tune in next time to see our first draft of out movie opener. 


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